Can someone please help me with my silk road essay?

Well you could add alot of good adjectives or make the font bigger. You could double space it too. But these won't make it too much longer. You could also put in there somewhere how the silk gets from silkworm cacoons to the accual finished product, or how the silkroad got its name (even thought its kinda easy to guess) and im sorry if you already ahd these in there.