Weed Story (A short story)?

umm that would never happen with weed, you should replace it with a more dangerous drug like coke.......and it kinda sounds like a cheesy after school special they make us watch in health cl.......back in the sixties they would make public access commercials like that saying weed makes you crazy, but everyone know it doesn't.....and your story has been done a few times....so change the drug to something stronger, and it would only be interesting if he started to do drugs then some how over came his addiction and quit.......that would make him a better hero for your story...if you know what i mean....have you seen requiem for a dream? that's the kinda stuff you have to write about if you want to inspire people to not do drugs,....i saw that movie and made sure i wouldn't even look at a needle......